Perhaps A Bit Too Optimistic (Page 3)

I should be done with the next page soon, but that double update thing was a bit much to hope for. I'm kinda drawing beyond my ability here (which is pretty much the point), so getting these pages done takes me an absurdly long amount of time. Still, I like the way they're turning out, and I'm sure I'm learning something by doing it.

EDIT: Looking over the next page, it's a good thing I exaggerated how far along I was on it because it's completely unnecessary. Here's what it looked like.
More action, and that's it. The artwork wouldn't have been any good either without some major tweaks. The last panel is just a different shot of what's going on in the previous two, and you'll notice that Flesh!Ace is actually earlier in his wind-up than in the previous panel. Plus, panel 2 would have just sucked, and I can tell that even with basic stick figures. There's also too much of a jump between this and the previous page. I may as well just cut to a different place if there's going to be that much of a time disparity (which is what I'm going to do). But don't worry. Sensical or not, I'm actually further along on the next page, so that shouldn't take too long.