This is gonna be my last day with an internet connection for a couple weeks, so I thought I'd give fair warning. I didn't get the next page done, mainly because I'm re-examining the comic so far.
I think I'm gonna tighten this stuff up, and start posting again when I've fixed some of the issues I have with it. Right now, it's too goddamn complicated for it's own good. I've gone through about seven pages of exposition and shit's still cryptic. I've really gotta trim the fat, here.
The main problem is that I'm just not good at going without a script. The attempt at launching the comic with that Richter-centered story proved that. I used a very rough script with the Personal Accountant Joe attempt, and even that ended up better. The problem there was in general direction of the series.
I'll be back as soon as I can.
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