Author/Sharp Pages

I've got three things to post today, since I missed yesterday's update and because two of them are only what I'd consider "half-an-update."

First page of Author/Sharp. Took two weeks to do this, due to a break I took to gain perspective. Perspective on this:
I made this version in one sitting, so I needed to stop what I was doing, take a break, and look at it after I had forgotten how I even made it. This helped it to not look like the lame version you see here. You'll notice that I did eventually realize the error in taking this the serious route, and on the redo, I fixed the monologue to actually make it sound like Ace talking. Voice isn't hard, it's just easy to forget about.
Unfinished second page. My laptop's screen is half-busted, so you can see why it's a bad idea to color on it without first making myself a template on my desktop.

I should talk about the decision to place the setting in another world, since this is its first occurrence. In short, it allows greater liberties and a greater importance on the secondary characters if the world has different rules. Also, it was a bit strange that a series about a character whose power is only limited by imagination took place in an environment that seemed to stifle imagination. Also, I can't trace buildings anymore, so it forces me to grow.